The Given & The Taken – How It Came to Be
Aislinn Kerry, author of awesome vampire stories Blood & Roses and Smoke, is at least partly to blame for The Given & The Taken, which is book #1 in the Tooth & Claw series. The two of us spend a great deal of time yakking via IM while we’re both writing (or, on occasion, procrastinating). One topic that has come up more than once is the idea of predestined mates. In short, it bugs us both. Of course it’s something that can be done well, but it also has the potential to be incredibly squicky, and we’ve both read a few too many examples of it meeting that potential.
Around the beginning of 2011, we’d been having another one of our conversations about predestined mates, and a plot bunny started gnawing on my brainstem. I had also been, for some time, pondering the idea of writing something paranormal. I like vampires and werewolves as much as the next person, but just hadn’t settled on the right story. Plot bunny, meet genre.
And this, my friends, is how L. A. Witt’s brain works:
What if a pair of predestined mates were so incompatible, there was just no way they would work out? Such as…say…she’s a woman, and he’s gay. Enter Levi, a wolf who’s been paired with Selena, who is pretty much the only one in the pack who understands why it’s just not going to happen. So, with her blessing, he finds a male mate, Ian, who happens to be human. The pack is less than thrilled (which, of course, makes me happy…always love stirring things up for the people in my head). They’re going to grudgingly let Levi bond with his chosen mate, but they aren’t going to make it easy for them.
In fact, you know what, Levi? We’re going to let you two bond, but then you’re going away for a year, and if Ian can find you after that year is up? Well, Mazeltov. If not, you get your sorry butt back here to the pack and bond with Selena like we told you to in the first place.
Awesome. Now I’ve got a monkey wrench thrown into the whole predestined mate thing, but I’d really like to bring in some vampires. The story just feels like it needs some bloodsuckers. Ooh, I’ve got it! Ian doesn’t do so well with this “year apart” stuff, and in a moment of weakness, not only cheats on Levi but does so with a vampire. And winds up converted to a vampire.
Levi’s pissed, of course. And Ian feels like an ass, because…well, he kind of was an ass. Oh, and Darius the vampire isn’t going to just fade into the shadows. He had a nibble of Ian and would like some more, thank you very much, even if a certain werewolf tries to get in his way.
At this point, I thought I saw the story laid out in front of me like a clear, straight stretch of Midwestern blacktop. Well, minus the cornfields and gas stations, anyway. Point being, the setup was there, the characters were in place, and it was go time. But every time I tried to flesh out the details, it all fell flat. Yeah, that Nebraska interstate was laid out in front of me, but my car was broken down on the side of the road with nary a tow truck in sight. (Pardon the travel puns and Midwest analogies…I just drove to Nebraska, so guess where my brain is.)
So what the hell is the problem? Come on, characters. Let’s get it together here. Pissed off werewolf, prodigal boyfriend, antagonistic vamp—wait. Wait just a second.
Darius doesn’t want to be a villain.
Okay, let’s try this again, this time with Darius in a protagonist’s chair. Much better.
Oh, and Selena? Selena doesn’t want to be a barely-there secondary character. Nuh-uh, author lady. I didn’t let my predestined mate wander off with a man so I could sit at home and knit. I’m not even coming along for the ride. Bitch, I’m driving!
And…there we go. I put together a nice shiny outline (ah, Excel, how I love thee), and started writing. The boys (and Selena) turned out to be an opinionated bunch, though, so I pretty much ditched the outline and followed them.
The end result?
The Given & The Taken, which is now available from Samhain. Keep an eye on my blog, Twitter feed, and website for updates about the sequel, The Healing & The Dying, as well as additional books in the Tooth & Claw series.
Don’t forget to to go to L A’s blog tomorrow for a new post in the Cock and Bull tour
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